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love poem.

Our love.

At first i thought it was just infatuation.
Then i came to the reality,
that i was in the process of just maybe,
Falling in love with you.

As the days and weeks past,
I was falling harder.
the thought of spending a day without you
was just simply unbearable.

Spending long days together.
The late night goodbyes,
Early morning calls,
It felt like a dream.

At first i didn't want to believe it.
I wanted to think you weren't the one.
I was just scared of getting hurt
all over again.

But it came to the point,
where i couldn't fake it.
I was completely head over heels crazy for you.
And i didn't nor couldnt hide it.

Now i can't see us apart.
Our love has grown so strong.
Together me and you,
We make the world jealous.

I'll never leave you,
I'll be yours forever.
And i hope you feel the same.
Because i believe were meant to be.

Everything i've ever wanted,
Or needed,
I found in you.
You are my everything.

Our love is all,
I could ever ask for,
In a lifetime.
Because i know, it never-ending.

Now you know i love you,
And i'll always care,
I'll never let you go,
I'll stay with you, forever and ever babe.

and for the record; i swear. =)

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  • TabbyCat
    February 13, 2008

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    This is sweet, but I couldn't really get into the flow of it because I couldn't find a meter or rhyme scheme. I still enjoyed it though. Thanks for entering my contest!


  • BeautifulFlame
    February 12, 2008
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    Loved it! I am going to play a poet now and tell you i know this is an old write so now when you start writing new writes a Theosorous or however you spell that will become you best friend!
    Also from you being an honors english major i think the new poems are gonna shock everyone.

    Love
    ~lisa~
    mom


  • Endeavor gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    Excellent


    Everything i've ever wanted,
    Or needed,
    I found in you.
    You are my everything.

    This is quite excellent
    Very mature words
    and thoughts

    Lovely

    Rick