Gentle rain sprinkling my face
Skin tingling with pleasure
Your body keeping me warm
My hearts deepest treasure
The day my life changed
The night my world rearanged
Six in the morning I should go home
But as I gaze into your exhausted stare
Everything's so perfect here
And I can't bring myself to care
Everything is perfect tonight
And thought it's wrong I know it's right
I know you care for me
More than he ever could
You show your love for me
More than he ever would
Only you came to my rescue
Now forever more I'll love you
That is a night I'll never forget
With the rain and rising sun
That wildfire that burned in us
The heat of newly discovered passion
So remember my love the sound of rain
And the passion not even a ring could tame
Author notes
about my current boyfriend. our first night together
please tell me what you think and if you see a spelling error tell me and i'll fix it
Comments
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Oh wow this is mind blowing. . .gotta be one of your best poems ever! very good write it sings in my head. Way to go! keep up the good writing let your feeling flow from you
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wtf no no no i said to myself i was going to forget about everything .................................................
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