Angel....
What would you prefer??
[[My finger on this trigger]]
Me face down,
Down across your floor
B...
E...
C...
A...
U...
S...
E...
[[I know exactly what is going on]]
How
About
I'm
Outside
Of
Your
Window...
[[Hold that gun to my head]]
I know you well enough
[[To know you never loved me]]
Why...??
Can't i feel anything??
Anything...??
She [[will]]
Destroy [[us]]
All [[before]]
She's [[through]]
And [[find]]
A [[way]]
To [[blame]]
Somebody [[else]]
........The only thing i regret is that i,......
................I never let you hold me back...
Author notes
Taking Back Sunday : Cute Without The 'E' (Cut From The Team)
A contest entry
- music = life ♥ by CatastrophicSmile.
300 points, ended March 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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mmm this is really good, but it's more like you just taking the real song and writing it in dirty pretty form, which wasn't really what i was looking for. i just wanted the song to be an inspiration/prompt. sorry if i confused you =[ but other than that i love how you did this
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