His heart beat fiercely in his chest, yet his courage failed him and he could not utter a word, but stood there, wearing a curious expression of hope, defiance and desire on his handsome face, his eyes staring into hers; she smiled at him, and he was complete.
Author notes
A one sentence story. Obviously.
A contest entry
- The One Sentence Story by littleBritain.
900 points, ended February 29, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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Brilliant!!! It's shorter than some of the others, but that's because all that needs to be (or should be) said has been. I like it!
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This is excelent it says so much in such a little bit. It's amazing what a persons smile can do to someone isn't it?
Koodles
Blessed be
Mystic
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