Sinking to the bottom, wearing shoes of cement
The fish gathered round to sing Cupid's lament.
The reason why his life was undone
Had stemmed from a bell of hoped love being rung-
A lovely young lady, involved with the Boss,
Had cried out on the day when her love had been lost.
He had dumped her for good, said his heart was to blame
So Cupid, with a plan for her vengence, took aim
But as his arrow let fly, his life was marked gone;
He should never have tried to skewer the Don.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Who Killed Cupid???? by Tattboyspet.
450 points, ended February 14, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh My Gosh sweetie this is such a friggin hilarious poem but a very done poem too. sorry iots 6 am your time 3 am here and I am dead tired *yawns* any ways well this is just a vey wqell penned poem and I like thie alot. you brought a very rare crackin smile from me and I just like this one alot. any ways its a very cool poem with alot of hilarious part sin it and I like your concept. I was slight,y disappoint tough sweetie no offense I thought you'd get into how Cupid died but thats okay maybe u did and I missed it blahness. any ways keep up the good work <3 ya Me P.S. Good Luck in the contest
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lmao! even CUPID should be scared of the Don???
thank you for your entry
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this was good i liked it a very italian way to go...lol..sits well with me being italian you never mess with the don...lol...nice job again and good luck in the contest.
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