a heart in love
is always tender,
given not
to one surrender,
battling always,
every day,
to find the light
that shows the way.
just Love can render
perfect surrender.
A contest entry
- Pen me 30 words or less by Seeking Peace.
375 points, ended February 14, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Think that quiet surrender is always the way to go. No need to attract lots of attention, but just need to know what you are doing. Liked the flow, rhythm and rhyme in these lines.
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Yep, I quite like this one.
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This is a lovely little piece with a nice flow to it, well done
Thank you for taking the time to enter, wishing you the best of luck
Karen -
The flow to this is amazing. It was beautiful what you said in this poem ~ in a beautiful way. It was quite enchanting to read. I dont know if that is possible.. But you made it so.
Wonderful job
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