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Knots In My Hair

Detangling this mess
that you left me in
burnt and torn
soreness of my skin,
can't brush away
all the ashes
or sweep up my heart,
poisons sink into me,
like rashes
shampoo burns my scalp
melted like my soul
blonde hair, now black as coal
one night, on arguement,
your actions shot me like a pistol
you win, you reign,
infinite pain.

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  • xSarahx
    May 1, 2008
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    Forgot KUDOS!

  • xSarahx
    May 1, 2008
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    Oh my God, this is so sad... Wow, I can picture it all. It actually reminded me of the scene from One Missed Call (practically the only part of that movie I saw) where the sicko mother burns her daughter's arm with the cigarette and abuses her and all this other stuff...

    so sad... but you write so well. Hope everything's good for you!! <3