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my story

stranger than fiction
yet always amazing
life

A contest entry

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  • tilldeathdowepart
    April 9, 2008
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    shweet

    thats really cool....♥


  • Tazmanian Poet
    March 10, 2008
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    wow,basically short simple and to the point.good job!


  • SwimForBetterDays.
    February 12, 2008

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    this is cute. it really sums up things in a short sentence basically. good job =]

    "stay golden"
    gabi


  • LostInTheDream
    February 12, 2008
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    Cute

    I really like this, espescially how you ended it with "life", but you might want to change the title... because you use life as a word in your poem, so you should have something different as a title, you only get those seven words, so add to the feeling with the title to get extra emotion in!