the knife peirced his heart,
just like the pain does mine,
stupid little cupid,
you're the one who should feel the pain,
you're cause of it all,
why did you make me fall,
fall harder then i expected?
your wings are gone and your arrows destroyed,
i hope you learned your lesson,
hearts arent meant to be played with....
A contest entry
- Who Killed Cupid???? by Tattboyspet.
450 points, ended February 14, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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oh my! now THAT'S telling cupid huh?
thank you for your entry
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i like this!
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nice job. i can't think of the word i want to say about this poem...(i failed english every year i took it so...) but it was good the words flowed well. and good luck in the contest as well...
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