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without cupid


no one will love
when no one can
see what is because
of what was and is
too infantile to know
the difference . .

greed killed cupid
to selfishly take
all . .

Author notes

prompt: Who killed Cupid and why is he dead?

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  • Gott ist tot
    February 13, 2008

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    Wise piece, I agree with your condemnation of the greed here. Good luck in the contest.
    Thanks for your comment.


  • Tattboyspet
    February 12, 2008
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    hmmmm ... different take on it
    thank you for your entry