Not you
never I dare to do it
but who resorted to this
inhuman and blood shedding act.
A lover who can kill his/her beloved's aspirations
A lover who can let loose the tender petals of a flower
and trample them down under his iron feet.
A lover who gets prepared, to spoil the entire happy situation
should have done it straight away,without allowing a recourse.
He,unable to bear his friends successes and his own failures
and who always prefers to have a dry spell and dry spell alone
and who is exactly against a lovable atmoshpere
should have resorted to this heinous act
He must have commited this bloody blunder,
quite unforgettable to any of us, in decades to come
Author notes
quite unforgettable to us in decades to come
A contest entry
- Who Killed Cupid???? by Tattboyspet.
450 points, ended February 14, 2008, 18 entries
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please check the begining of the second last line
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sorry
sorry for the 'typo'
thank you
i carried out the correction
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