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Glowing Sunlight

Muted shades of sunlight
Drifting ever forward
My eyes glance upward
Every beam is alight
Glowing radiantly

I sit humbly in my pew
Gracefully accepting
The love He has sent me
In His ray of sun
In His church

A contest entry

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  • Samplette gold member
    September 15, 2008
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    This is a nicely written and uplifting piece of poetry. A beautiful read. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 12, 2008
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    Beautifully penned. I love your take on the phot
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • Kelli Marie
    February 12, 2008

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    I would have never thought of such a beautiful write that connects to the picture so well. Beautiful write. I really enjoyed the read.
    I hope you do well in the contest.
    Kelli


  • Samplette gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    I love where you went with the picture. Very well thought out. It has great depth and beautiful imagery. A comforting write. Best wishes to you in the contest.
    Sam