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Dear God # 2


It’s me again

1. Can’t people hear me when I speak ?

2. Why won’t you bring my girl back?

3. Will  I ever find love?

4. Why did my aunt have to die of  brain cancer?

5. Do people really understand me?

6. Why won’t my mom give me chance to live my life?

7. Why did my grandpop have to put me out?

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  • smonte19124 gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    Your writing expresses a great deal of hurt and pain. I am unfamiliar with your style of poetry but I recognize that it is poetry. Keep writing and yes God answers prayers so keep talking to him too. God Bless