"Rapunzel, Rapunzel
Let down your long hair
Living with out you
I can not bear"
"I will not, I will not
let down my long hair
it hurts when you pull it
It kills me I swear"
"But how shall I rescue you?
How shall I be?
I refuse to live
unless you marry me"
"Well, I'm perfectly happy
up here in my tower
I have my singing lessons
in less then an hour"
"Then I will kill myself, Princess
and look what you've done
I'll stick this sword threw my heart
I swear by the sun"
"Get on with it then
because I will not come down
I'm an independent women
and tonight I'll sleep sound"
So the prince stuck the sword
right threw his chest and
The princess went to her lessons
and tryed to sing her best
so the moral of the story
is not to follow rules
and if a prince comes to your tower
and trys to rescue you,
tell him to back off
and get to know you first
and if that doesn't work
go and sing a verse
A contest entry
- Rapunzel by autarky.
750 points, ended February 20, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #47 Something to laugh about by daviscth.
475 points, ended February 27, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Twisted Fairy Tales by KayJay.
700 points, ended March 26, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Show Me Some Love
Comments
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Love your twist!!!
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Thanks so much for posting in my contest.
Cathy
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LOL. I loved the new outlook on an old favorite. Thanks so much for posting for my contest, this was really gteat.
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