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It Is Only A Mask

Beauty,
a mask to disguise
what can't be said or felt,
a perfect place to hide.

No one wants
to see the imperfections
lying underneath the skin.
They are too shallow.

It's only a status symbol
people like to wear like badges.

Author notes

Though she may be a beauty, it is but one layer of skin."

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  • subliminal girl
    February 12, 2008
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    Very thoughtful true write! You managed to exress a lot within those few lines. Wonderful poem!

  • Liquid memories
    February 12, 2008

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    well never thought of it that way. thanks for sharing.


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    Great write this I thank you for taking up the last spot (yay!) Only thing, people is mispelt in the last line, but other than that, really good.

    ~*~* Angel *~*~