Outer beauty
Hides demon soul
A beautfull shell
To an evil egg
A innocent face
Hide corupted tought
A beautfull woman
On the outside
but the inside hides all demon race
A contest entry
- Contest: PIF 10/10/10 (quote inspired) by Noir mariposa...x.
395 points, ended February 12, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on the silver!
A wonderful take on the prompt. Beauty is only skin deep, no telling what's underneath. This is a delightfully dark piece, superbly penned, congrats on a very well earned silver
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this is really awsome, it explains in a way how things can decive (sp?) you.
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Can I swear? Delete my following comment if it makes your profile all dirty.
Shit, this gave me some chills. I think I like this poem the very best. But, I haven't read all your poems.
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Great job on the silver cup sis...you ROCK! but of course you know that already
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Well done sweetheart!!! Well deserved trophy. Ahhhh yes, many a beautiful face hides an evil interior! Shows we must make sure we are beautiful on the inside...
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a beautiful and deep penning my beautiful kitty you have captured the prompt so powerfully. well done and best of luck
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Ooo, I likes this one.
Best of luck in the contest
~*~* Angel *~*~
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