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assault

rape her young innocence
to take what is not yours . .

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prompt: Forbidden love
10 words

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  • nordicsky silver member
    February 13, 2008

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    A strong, thought provoking poem.
    Not much joy in taking, only in accepting that which is freely given and giving in return.

    Kind regards,
    Peter


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 13, 2008
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    Deeply gripping and intense... x


  • Lady Eventide
    February 12, 2008

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    Wow. Interesting take on the prompt. I loved that this had a bit of a dark tone. Great work. I wish you all the best.