I sit here, day in and day out
Watching the world revolve
Waiting for time to pass
Wondering what tomorrow will bring
If it brings anything at all
The leaves outside my window
Changing with the seasons
Time passing me by
While I sit and watch it all unfold
Outside my window....
A contest entry
- This is how I feel... by azlyn.
529 points, ended February 19, 2008, 17 entries
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i am greatly impressed by rthis piece of work. it reminds me of myself all day and, i relate to it totally, i loved it, everything was right about it, even the cadences. tho, maybe they could have been slightly stronger, but i won't knock an excellent piece of work. good stuff, keep it up! -
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Open the door honey...get out and live. I think this may have been written a while back though. It was very touching and well laid out. You did yourself proud.
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Nicely done and well said. Thoughts one might have on a quiet afternoon. Happy trails
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A very lovely poem. I think we all sit and watch the seasons change out the window. I can't wait till the leaves to return and replace these brittle bare branches.
Thank you for sharing. A very nice poem. Take care, Sandy 
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This has such a distant feel...like the window is your only connection to life. Very deep and emotional...feels lonely to me. Thank you for sharing your moment. Best of luck!
Az
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