I killed cupid
yes it was me
because he made it
so I couldn't see
His arrow it hit me
right in the eye
so I broke his wings
so he couldn't fly
Then I took his bow
and smashed it in two
Now lets see
What cupid can do
A contest entry
- Who Killed Cupid???? by Tattboyspet.
450 points, ended February 14, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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LMAO! wonderful!
thank you for your entry
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I love this! How creative. You have me hooked. Shancy.
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i like this! all rhyming n wut not. love it!
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nice job and good luck in the contest....and the person below me is right he does need to practice some with that shooting i still have some scars from all the ones hes shot at me.
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ROFLMAO
Now this is funny for something like this... cheeky little bugger needs to practice before he goes shooting people.
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*Giggles*
Oh my goodness, that was so playfully cute I couldn't help but smile when I read that, so adorable
Great Write!!
I will admit though, your capitalization bothers me in some spots, but I do the same, so I'm not one to say anything there!
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