with my mind spinnning,
and my ears ringing,
thinking and knowing i should be out drinking,
cause there is fear there to break my heart,
and to tear my life apart,
could there be a way to get a fresh start?
i got to get on track and start thinking with my heart.
i hope i get a second chance to draw the right card,
cause i believe that is what is makeing my life hard,
i hope i can start out fresh and new.
maybe u just needed a minute or few,
i will always pray there is a me,
and always pray there is a you,
without you there is no me,
so let's get together and that makes two,
cause you love me,
and i will always love you,
so that's what i am gonna do,
and that my dear,
is to always love you,
cause that is the least i can do for you,
i hope you believe that my words are true,
cause they are all for you,
and that is why i can say 'I LOVE YOU'.
A contest entry
- What Can't You Live Without? by soccer220.
900 points, ended February 26, 2008, 14 entries
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this is a poem about my girlfriend and i. i can't live without her in my life she is my everything .
Comments
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Aha..... very good idea! It is one of the more original ones! When you ask of the one thing you can't live without, most people automatically think of a material object. Your topic shows that you gave this poem some thought, well done!! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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