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asylum from the darkness

This darkness is always creeping always hiding never showing what its true intentions really are. Our final battles are fought here against unseen enemies, there's no victory no loss only the battle that rages on forever in the night. We have no allies against the darkness of night, they would be no help against the enemy unseen. Only the daylight brings temporary asylum, but as ever is a fleeting moment as the sun sets. The night is only an illusion of safety, it hides the real dangers that creep around every corner of every street. you just want to give up to give in to let this darkness overtake you, just as it creeps in from every corner it reveals itself to me, be not afraid of this darkness for you are the darkness of night.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    Welcome to All Poetry

    I liked the images your words gave me. It's true that the night can be a safety haven or a battleground.
    A very interesting ending with all the questions you posed in this. Seems like you chose to be p[art of the drak.
    Thanks so much for sharing
    If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help.
    Gaylene