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~ Abyss Of The Heart ~





Sometimes I drift within the spiritual shadows of
my being floating between the here and now.
My soul travels within what could have been
lightly floating back into the fold of re-wind.
What lives deep must escape, and I find myself lost
in the wandering of non healed sparks intensified
by splintered heart that still beats for you.

I sail within the fog of self written scripts of what
it is I want to see,
Longing for freedom that seems locked and
stitched within the cob-webs of memories.

(Yet I linger)

Held within the monochromatic of sleep
hands reaching within the fog as I float
between the hear and now.
My heart floating within the breeze deceived, as
I try and recapture the moments when hope was
all I could conceive.



 

Author notes

Poem written with inspiration from:
The Sound Of Ache

http://allpoetry.com/poem/3582614





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Image "Heart of Nothing" by Princess of Shadows
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  • poet2angels gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    remember this beautifull poem ...You bring so much emotion to the surface with this amazing piece

    "My heart floating within the breeze deceived, as
    I try and recapture the moments when hope was
    all I could conceive."

    love it

    Lynda


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 8, 2008

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    in the wandering of non-healed sparks intensified.

    How well I know those feelings. This is simply beautiful. I am so pleased to see it recognized with a trophy. A wonderful write from your tender pen. Well done. ~Pamela

  • gilsgal
    March 2, 2008

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    IN AWE!!!

    Words cannot express how good I feel this poem is!

    My favorite part:
    What lives deep must escape, and I find myself lost
    in the wandering of non healed sparks intensified
    by splintered heart that still beats for you.

    So deep....


  • vena sera
    February 24, 2008
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    l0ve it!! i love all ur work...i love ur style
    it is beautiful


  • PerfectImperfection
    February 17, 2008

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    A beautiful lovelorn sense of longing still... Nicely penned interpretation of the poem that prompted. Thank you for taking the time to enter & Best wishes in the contest!

  • poet2angels gold member
    February 16, 2008
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    This is beautifully written with such a kinship to the tone of her poem

    I loved these lines:

    "What lives deep must escape, and I find myself lost
    in the wandering of non healed sparks intensified
    by splintered heart that still beats for you."

    So much emotion

    Lynda

  • -lk-
    February 12, 2008

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    Oh my goodness! Living in the if onlys and the what could have beens is such a sad, unsettling place to be. But as you have so beautifully stated...we linger there within the ache.
    I am always blown away by beauty that flows from your pen...and no matter the subject, the underlying tone of "honest" is there within the words...

    Warmest blessings~


  • Arkbear gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    Hi Shey ~

    I agree with Sandy....this is really deep....loved this...>>>>

     

    I sail within the fog of self written scripts of what

    it is I want to see,
     
    So many great lines penned....each presenting power to your Theme and Tone ~
     
    I think, you as a Writer, have come a long way since we met almost 2 years ago.....definatley a difference in formatting and non-rhyme suit you well :)
     
    Lovely write indeed,
     
    Bear ~


  • Frogzter gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    WOW! Like a fine wine girlfriend you just keep getting better with time! This is deep! Really deep and I was lost within your words as I linger between the here and now and what was! Awesome piece!

    Love ya,

    Sista~


  • LadyUnique silver member
    February 12, 2008

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    yep this is how it feels to linger in the past. i like that you've added that we don't want to do that. it's an uncontrolable thing sometimes.
    I really, really like this for many reasons I enjoy seeing your ability to write grow


  • blondone
    February 12, 2008

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    Oh I love this and how true are the images floating between the here and now oh my I love this by far one of the best poems I have read in awhile I will have to bookmark this one Oh I love it outstanding writing of true raw emotions


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    seems so sad, and afraid , lost so to speak,the heart is lost within the mist of something faraway, I like this as it almost like back in the years of the pirates seeking their treasures,lol

    thank you as always for sharing, good luck..Moons


  • Malabu
    February 12, 2008

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    reminds me of being adrift in the sea of aches...now wind to power your sails...and as you bear your soul...darkness rises from the sea...there are no stars and moon to guide you...nor a compass to bring you home...

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