i hear;
your voice
as mild wine
your touch:
bitter.
A contest entry
- Affairs of the heart by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended February 13, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Criticism Is Very Much Welcomed -- I Am Here To Learn
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Very grasping and intensely creative... x
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Haven't been reading your stuff lately. Great to see it's still lovely. Oh, wow. So touching. I wish you all the best.
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Wonderful brevity here, yet still so much to ponder on. Now you have me wondering why there's such a difference between the lips and the touch...."taste" would have worked well there too
Lovely and well done.
~ Nicolette
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lovely!
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I love this poem -- short and precise and saying a lot in those few words. Well done!
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