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I Wanna Get Stuck With You

My BP get firmed
Heart beats work in such
Disaster as soon as I get
A vision of you!

A contest entry

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  • Venugopal gold member
    July 19
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    O.K. my sweeet sister naughty as usual


  • Romily
    February 21, 2008
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    Thank you Pretty lady............................

  • Leaving Today
    February 21, 2008
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    brevity well done

  • Romily
    February 19, 2008
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    thanks


  • Sabir Abdus Samee
    February 14, 2008
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    I understood

    I understood your poem as I am in love.
    Well done.

  • Romily
    February 12, 2008
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    Really Confusing??????????? have not you ever been in LOVE????????????????????


  • willcrook
    February 12, 2008
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    Confusing :)

    hehe x


  • sunflowerpoet
    February 12, 2008

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    This one made me smile It is a beautiful portrait of those butterflies we have in our stomachs when we spot our loved ones The heart beat and BP does gain speed! Thanks for entering.
    Hugz,
    Sunflower.

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