Did I express my love to you? Are you affectionate towards me?
Are the flowers in your garden still weaving scented fragrance?
What about the lake nearer to your house ?
Is it flowing to the brim even today?
How are the cultivators around your farm house?
Are they reaping remunerative prices?
All these questions are not addressed to you in the context!!!
They are quite irrelevant and impertinent too, in the contest!!!
Is our beaming love really skin deep?Is this maxim true?
"angels" say beauty shining outwards is only one layer thick!!
Author notes
PROMPT: "Though she may be a beauty, it is but one layer of skin."
A contest entry
- Contest: PIF 10/10/10 (quote inspired) by Noir mariposa...x.
395 points, ended February 12, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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That makes more sense now, thanks for it
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Intersting take on the prompt. I personally wouldn't of come up with that, so congrats on that.
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