Sands caress my feet
As I walk barefoot on beach-
Redemption from tides
Please tell me what you think
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I so admire how you can write Haiku so beautifully! I have never attempted it ....yet
Excellent!
Lynda
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Thank you so much, Lynda, for your kind comment on my work! I am glad you stopped by and enjoyed
Sophie
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Another beautiful haiku. You clearly have a real talent for them. I can almost feel the warm sun on my shoulders as I walk through the sand, the sand pouring in between my toes as I lift my feet.
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fantastico
My first thought was a vivid image of the scene that you painted with your haiku. You did a fantastic job I think. I hope I dream abouth the sandy beaches tonight. Thank you for this lovely read. -
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Your sweet comment is much appreciated; Thanks for the encouraging word!
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You have managed to not only paint
a picture with your words but an
emotion too. great job with this one.
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Thanks for the generous comment! Your kindness is much appreciated...
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So little but so great. Love the style.
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Thanks bro, for your generous comment! Hope you are doing well. Blessings Always
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I love to go to the beach! Its so relaxing and mysterious!
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interesting
this is interesting and this is how i feel as i walk on the beach in the sand. i love the beach and being near the water.i'd love to have a house near the water. but not so if there was a flood that my house would be in trouble. i find the beach and water calming. spent many summers with friends on the beach we have two different ones in our area.
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