Look into my eyes, My lies are here to keep, I wake to a lifeless sleep, I dream a life to keep, Waiting a moment of my own, Perfect day to show, As I hide in the darkness, Afraid to go, Bring me a world, Life of my own, No pain Nor suffering. Look into my heart, There shall be happiness, Love to gain, For all that's happened, I'll never be the same, I wish to have a life, I wish to have you, We shall bring love and warmth, everything one needs. So I ask you, Do I deserve all the same, Is my life that much of a shame.
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I like this. Short but to the point kinda thing. =D Nice job.
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this is a very rich poem. and i also like the rythem of this peice.
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This is deep and very well-written. I like the rhyme in this as well. I feel that there is frustration here, written in this piece. Keep writing.
Much love
Wayne Leon
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