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What lies beneath

Skin deep,  beneath the bones
Lies a rolling heart of darkness
Consuming all it meets

Sweet, innocent eyes
Persuade him to trust
Unknowing into the depths he sinks

Evil, evil underneath
No one would ever believe
Emotions betray, her thoughts.
Ugliness lurks beneath

A contest entry

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 12, 2008

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    Ohhhh this is an interesting piece, what lies beneath... sensational take on the prompt sweets as you do these very well.... goodluck in this contest

    Karen


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    February 12, 2008
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    Very nice indeed. Great take on the prompt!

    THANK YOU! for entering

    ~*~* Angel *~*~


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    "Though she may be a beauty, it is but one layer of skin." Tis the prompt of the comp

    Good luck