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Lonely

Anger, hate frustration
Staring at me now
Why are you so ugly
You fat disgusting pig
Your clothes don't even fit right
Your hair it is a mess
Yes I am staring
You disgust me to no end
Fall off the face of earth
you pitiful soul

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This is how I feel every day, when I go out in public. Being overweight and feeling selfconsious of anyone looking in my direction.

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 19, 2008

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    Great Pic and an honest statement of your feelings--
    Best of luck in the contest!


  • jcat gold member
    February 26, 2008
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    I hope that you really read these comments on here and absorb them deep and listen to this wonderful advice!! I love you and you are BEAUTIFUL!!!! Listen to what Friday here says.......she speaks words of wisdom my friend!!!!


  • Exodus gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    My computer is slow so it took a second to load the picture. I was rather surprised when it did. But this is just what I was looking for.
    Though you should never be self conscious, there is only one you, and who says that you have to be a size zero with half a dozen eating disorders to be perfect?
    Thank you


  • Anne Marie
    February 13, 2008

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    Don't let anyone tell you differently, you are beautiful. If you feel comfortable about how you look, then who cares what others think.
    I can relate to this poem. Instead of being classed as overweight im at the opposite end. I have been slim all my life but as i have got older people have said i look anorexic or im too underweight. I know i am not. It has taken me a while to be comfortable with who i am but i know the people who care about me will tell me if i was to ever get underweight. I don't listen to people who call me underweight for the sake of putting me down.

    Just remember that the people who care about you will love you for who you are. You are BEAUTIFUL!

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, another brilliant write!

    xxx


  • MysticalRayne
    February 12, 2008

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    I just noticed the comment - never let anyone put you down - you are both beautiful inside and out - remember that .......


  • MysticalRayne
    February 12, 2008
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    This is great and this picture - well he speaks for himself lol - Excellent best of luck in Friday's contest


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    auntie dont feel this way for you are beautiful both inside and out and i love you just the way you are


  • pappacass
    February 12, 2008
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    are you kidding me

    don't ever feel that way about yourself....be who you are and to hell with them

  • jcat gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    WOW!!! When did yo have these snapshots done?? I can totally tell they were professionally done ...Hahahahahahahahahaha........... You are to funny!!! You are truly one of the most beautiful people I know and I hope someday that you see that in your reflection. Until than fire your photographer...He got your bad side here....ahahahahahahhahaahahaaa!!!! Best of luck!!

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