She stands alone
Holding the suture gently
That encloses her burned heart
Blocked from having her own life
Deficient of her own wishs
Exiled from her own kind
Unaided; She walks
The path she is meant to
Maybe not the path she wished
Barbed wired clouds
Slip across her vision
Leading a life of pledge
Deported from their hearts
Into an unknown life
Author notes
title Exile i hope its ok
A contest entry
- A Little Of Everything by Firequeen.
700 points, ended February 26, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you really think
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i love this
its full and raw and has the sense of telling only a little of the tale
letting the reader wonder about the rest
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I didn't read the poem. Honestly, I was wayyy too distracted from the background (although right now I feel as if I have ADD to the MAX lol and the worst attention span I have ever had)! This background is so pretty! I wish I could make backgrounds.... especially a background like this. The pictures are so pretty that I can't stop staring at them! YAY! PRETTINESS!
...ok... I'm going to stop this comment now. It's not even about the poem that I didn't read lol. Sorry!
Alex -
this is such a deep and poetic piece it holds alot in your words with a twist of dakrness well done beautiful sis
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d E E p
quite deep and heartfelt..reminds me of Evanescence's music..
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