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A little Glass Rose

A little glass rose falls to the floor
Shatters,
The stem is gone,
but the bud is still there.
The stem that held you together fed your love,
is gone.
Nothing is left for love to feed from,
And soon,
It will die.

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  • XXCrimsonRaineXX
    June 7, 2008

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    Wow, this is amazing. I loved the emotion I can feel in this piece. The shattered rose was a good metaphor.
    Excellent write.

    XXCrimsonRaineXX


  • Ithica silver member
    February 12, 2008

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    Oh how heartbreaking! I can picture the fragility in my mind! Sad when love ends and you feel life is all but over! She found the thorn! Thank-you for this beautiful entry!


  • sweetgirlwa
    February 12, 2008
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    Powerful imagry here, very nice work. Good luck