I love you in silence
To speak of it would betray
all that we have promised each other
Mesmerized by your existence in my life,
the passion that you bring forth,
and the desire to have you endlessly
Our feelings are disguised,
covered in a longing for each other that
we have waited a lifetime to experience
Shall I say the words that
my heart feels,
or take the chance of losing you forever?
Simple yet complicated
Author notes
Quote prompt:
"Deep in my heart I'm concealing things that I'm longing to say. Scared to confess what I'm feeling - frightened you've already slip away.”
-Longing
-Desire
-Passion
-Mesmerized
-Betrayal
A contest entry
- Love- Anything goes by Rachel21.
700 points, ended March 8, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very beautiful words....You said it with so much ease...all gold worthy! Congrats..
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i love this poem
it really is a real life experience and i can feel it in the poem you wrote.makes me think of an event happening in my life
GOOD LUCK -
fantastic
Been there and done that. I can truly relate to these words. sometimes when you are experiencing things you think you are the only one, and even though the writer might not have gone through it, because it is in writing it makes me believe some one might have. thanx, conni
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i love this poem! i also love the picture!
thank you,good luck in my contest!
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This is wonderful! Excellent use of the word bank and your take on the prompt is also excellent! Best of luck in the contest.
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This Is A Gold Winner
Once again your words are amazing. I especially like the first few lines of this poem because it starts out powerful and the rest of the poem just compliments what was already said from the start. This is a show of your skill as a poet. Don't stop the creativity. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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this is a beautiful piece god mommy your words are so soft and gentle and beautifully written from the word bank
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