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No Country Darling

Look around and tell me,
do you feel like you belong here?
Or perhaps you daydream that one day you might
fall through the cracks in the sky,
and come out the other side
to visions of bright streaking lights
and glamorous faces,
of glittering buildings kissing the clouds
as they block out the rhinestone-studded blanket
that always seemed too vast.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    February 14, 2008

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    This reminds me of a young adult with stars in their eyes thinking about heading for New York City or LA or somewhere like that. Great take on the prompt. Thanks for entering and good luck. Be well and be blessed