i upgrade
i feel warm to the touch
cool to the bone
gold is my center
heart is my stone.
twenty four
their all lined up
there calling
calling
lightning strikes
they all fall down
then i fall down.
why?
flashes
i see them like quick knives
stabbing into my eyes
stitches
she calls for them
stitches them shut
stitches in my side
from laughing
till that's all that's left.
nothing but joy. . .
gone
A contest entry
- This is how I feel... by ChildOfRhiannon.
529 points, ended February 19, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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hm...you're so cool. you're gonna have to explain this one to my tiny brain.
I love you. I hope i get to see you tomorrow!!
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CONFUSION??? I will need to read this a few more times. It is very spontaneous I believe! Abstact thought is so very subjective and so easily misunderstood...thanks for the entry and best of luck. {I will read again and continue to think!}
Az
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