Sitting in this empty cage
Having to endure one more day
I can't tell what future lies ahead
But I only have the thoughts of wishing I were dead
To have these days go on so fast
I don't know how much longer I can last
These heavy chains are latched onto my heart
No matter how hard I pull they just won't come apart
My breathing is slow and not the same
And all the thoughts in my mind are driving me insane
Just like my heart my body is cold and hard
I can't remember the last time I've eaten, but I don't care if I starve
The only thing I want while in this dark cage
Is to maybe somehow just finish this pa....
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I like this, I think anything written about personal pain can't sound forced so no worries there. I like your style and I am glad to see you're posting new poems keep up the good work. maybe work on your flow though bur all in all this is good
well done
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