As darknees seeps in and takes over my
soulless, mangled, and mauled body,
I stare ahead hoping to catch the light,
Instead I see you, Coming for me,
Are you here to save me?
Or just to watch and laugh?
I cry to you, "Save ME!"
But you just stand there,
watching me, with a slight smile on your face,
My body craves the blood that floats in the air,
I can taste it and my desire for death takes over my mind,
Suddenly you are there beside me,
Feeding me the blood i desire,
I try to resist waiting for death to come,
The salty taste leaks into my open mouth,
As life comes again I smile at you,
"You are the one I was waiting for,"
I say, " You are my destiny, my soul mate for life."
I stand and we walk out of the bloodied room,
and into an eternity or blood and darkness together.
A contest entry
- Just in Time For October by realism-vs-romance.
525 points, ended November 13, 2008, 9 entries
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1550 points, ended December 23, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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great job! I can see this in my head
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it waas good!=)
very imaginative. it sounds like something from out of a book.
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great write!! i can picture the scene. thanks for the entry!
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Into the darkness
we walk hand in hand to the mystery of the night and the way of the Vampyr. I seek the succulent and fresh taste of new blood. Thanks for your entry!
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It was a tad cliche, but a good read nonetheless.
I was vaguely reminded of Interview with a vampire and Vampire knight combined.
Not that you know what vampire knight is.
ohwell, good luck in the contest!
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I so know what Vampire Knight is!!!! i read manga! lol thank you
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Have you ever read the book/watched the movie "Interview with a Vampire"? That's what this reminded me of. I'm not entirely sure if I'm on the right track with the intended subject but nevertheless, an awesome write.
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What a twisted write. The images were dark, and powerful. Some lines were a little cliche, but I enjoyed this nonetheless. Nice work.
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