I am completely alone
Sitting in my room
My thoughts and emotions
Are like a cyclone
I have no one to talk to
And no one to hear me
I have nothing right now
Not even you
I wish I could feel you
And hold you close to me
You complete my soul
You're my love, my only true
Please love me forever
Because I will you
I can never live without your love
Without you, my heart would sever
No one understands me
No one but you
Everything else is trivial
You set my heart free
Author notes
I'm upset. No one gets me, except for the one person I've never met. Ironic.
1st in dec-feb contest--name: teddybearhugz
A contest entry
- Best prewrite between december 07 and february 08! by danceswsquirrels.
1910 points, ended April 1, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice write!!
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Sentiments well expressed in these lines; easy to read and understand what you are saying with your words.
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Good
Like a moth to a flame you seduce us with the heat of you words and we fall prey to your magic spell. This poem is well written and presents an original viewpoint of a woman's love for her soul mate and how he magnifies her zest for life. Your words cling to the reality that has been brought to your existence with a firm grip.
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