overcast showers
birdbath swim party canceled
huddle in the branch
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful imagery, good form and counts..thank you for your entry, Ken IBT
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thank u
Thank u for the applaudes and the wonderful sentiments given. I started my first contest and would like to extend a hand to come in and give it ago. Please give me some pointers of what u think. Its called "Weathergram#1-Spring" and their done in the haiku or tanka form with a twist. Saddie23
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