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I'm me

I'm trying to be myself,
And who you want me to be.
But the two don't mix.
You like who I'm not,
And hate who I am.
You try to change me,
To be your better half.
I begin to turnaway,
Just to be free
Yet you abandon me,
for being me,
Is that fair?

this is for alicia. 2 first lines by alicia

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  • peridotPixi
    February 28, 2008
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    nice job

    i like the way that you state that somone else cannot change you i like the way this poem flows