a mother is someone who loves her childeren
it does not matter what they do
she is always the one you can count on
the one who will always help out when you need it
her door will be open when you need a place to go
you can always go to her with your problems
shes the one that will never let you down
you may hate her sometimes when she gets after you
but she does this because she loves you
she does not want to see you make mistakes
she wants you to have better than what she had in life
a better life that you deserve
Author notes
i think that i could be a good mother too you bevcause i will be there when you need to talk
silent20girl
A contest entry
- AP family by xXMascarra-TearsxX.
900 points, ended March 1, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Your gonna be a great mother don't ya worry. Just take the advice of your mother and you will raise one just fine
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Hate to break it to u . .
Be thank ful u have a mom, my mom is Schizophrenic and she cares more about the voices in her head than me. So I can't run to her, dear girl. WQe is me. Cherish that women, ya hear.
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great poem great write but not every1 has such a loving mother like the one you describe in thes poem none the less i loved it
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thank you so much for entering this was a great poem very true I loved this and thank you for wanting to be in my family good luck in my contest
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