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Deepness

I am deep
Because I see what those other kids don't

I am deep
Because I know the difference
Of self-pity or a cry for attention


I see of someone is lying
I see if they are hurt
I can tell if they are planning
Or whether they are good or evil

I am deep

Author notes

I cry for help does not always come in the form you expect.

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    February 12, 2008
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    This will do okay. Thanks for entering.
    Good luck.
    Brian