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Cherokee Heart

Upon his wrists new ink
forms a band of letters
written in Cherokee.
One wrist for each sister
honoring them and his love
for his heritage.


This Man child carries
a name that speaks Irish,
but inside, the blood flows
to the rivers and deep woods
of the Cherokee nation.

His essence cries freedom.
His face, smooth and yet unlined,
seeks out to wander untethered,
waiting for his own adventures
to find their place
in his heart.


(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson
  February 11, 2008

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  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    February 19

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    Hoodwinked!

    This is a lovely descriptive character sketch. I like how you start from his outer appearance then talk about his person then reflect the depths of his heart, a nice progression indeed. You are a talented painter of word pictures, well done dear poet!

    You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits today because WE CARE!

    Dennis

  • Word poet
    May 17, 2008

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    I'am part Navo and this is a great poem honoring us and the beauty of what our calture is thank you for writing such a lovely poem. Great job..


    • Debbysmiles gold member
      May 19, 2008
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      Word Poet

      Thank you so much ! I'm glad you enjoyed this as much as I enjoyed writing it. Blessings. Debby


  • VioletElizabeth
    February 12, 2008

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    Wow, I love it. Short, sweet, and to the point. I love how clear it is; you've said so much in such a few words. Bravo! I like the background you choose to go with it as well. It's very peaceful, and very calming.

    Keep up the fantastic work!
    xx
    V/E

  • ocerus
    February 12, 2008

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    I like this okay, but there are a couple of typos and inconsistencies. If you want help, im me, okay? - oce

    • Debbysmiles gold member
      February 12, 2008
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      Oce

      Thankya for your honest comments. I don't see the typos but sure.. help is always appreciated. Blessings. Debby


  • Devils Reject
    February 12, 2008

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    This is a great piece It made me think of my grandpa, he was half Cherokee. Great write


    • Debbysmiles gold member
      February 12, 2008
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      DR

      Thank you so much for reading and commentingb. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Blessings. Debby


  • capricornpoet
    February 11, 2008
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    Cherokee heart

    Tale of the past whispering the future in the blood of
    a newborn..lovely .


    • Debbysmiles gold member
      February 11, 2008
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      Poet

      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. It is mush appreciated. Blessings. Debby

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