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Black Death

Thoughts rushing
Feeling racing
An ocean of depression
Over flowing me
In hurting
Sinking deeper
Free Falling
Faster
Into the darkest
Chasm
An empty hole
As tears implode
I slip
Slowly into the death
Awaiting me

Author notes

Something I wrote in placement. This is all truthful

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  • DestiniesTwined
    March 3, 2008
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    This is really good. Thanks for entering it into my contest. I wish you much luck.


  • Elenaliz
    February 11, 2008
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    alot of feeling,really depressing i hope you feel better soon.


  • ashes engraved
    February 11, 2008

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    I really related to this. Great write. It's raw; raw doesn't need revision, it's organic. I hope to read more from you in the future.


  • XxDie In VainxX
    February 11, 2008

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    Wow

    Awesome Poem, My Faveourite Part Was
    "I Slip Slowly Into The Death Awaiting Me"
    Great Work ^_^


  • SkitzoFreakshow
    February 11, 2008

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    Yet again i understood everything you said in this really good and understandable poem.Its dark but yet really good

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