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Patiently that love, that night will come.

Patiently that love, that night will come.













An innocent virgin, yearning the
hold me tenderly treat me gently
mesmerizing lovemaking.

She wanted the fairytale night
like Johnny & baby’s, from dirty dancing.
A true coming together of two souls,
to be held precious, like she is.

Patiently waited and then came his words
“I love you, you mean, so much to me”; she asked
and trusted he would plan it all.

The night arrived bringing….

The softest satin sheets
glistening in candlelight,
aphrodisiacal scents seducing
every sense to life.

She wanted to lose her mind
in the loving pleasure he could give,
he knew it, saw desire starting to
burn in her eyes.

He laid her down,
leaving her lacy pink underwear
in place.
Hands began travelling
over her body.
Gasping,
shocked at how good it feels
rising up to met his lips
tongues find one another,
he gently bites
her lip.

Lost in the moment
underwear is practically
torn off, hips rising
and falling
to his hands
moving all over her,
moving down
to her
hottest spot, slick and
opening up
to this journey.

Moving slowly,
he made sweet,
soft
slow love to her.
Wanting nothing more then
bliss,
for her first time.
Whispering, “I love you “,
as he felt her tighten around him.
She moaned,
then screamed out, in her pleasure.
Only managing
“Love, too “in her explosion,
a stunning orgasm.


She got the fairytale night
like Johnny & baby’s, from dirty dancing.
A true coming together of two souls,
to be held precious, like she is.

The candles burning away,
their shadows show
bodies curled together,
holding and
complacently in love.


Author notes

I took the side of love and decided to tell a story of love & losing virginity within my words
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  • Tarja
    February 18, 2008

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    I am unaware of how I missed so many of your stunning pieces but now I see how much I have been missing out. What really hooked me onto this one was the story... you really incorporated something magnificent into this one. Well done and good luck.


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      February 18, 2008
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      Thanks Tarj
      I did want to tell quite a story within the words, gld you felt that


      Cindy