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away from me

I can't bear another one leaving--
off to college-
back home-
away from me.
pretending it doesn't hurt
to have a best friend ripped away...













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short, (but I mean..

I really can't stand everyone LEAVING.)

i may just use this in another piece..

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  • Hell In Harmony
    February 26, 2008
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    =[. A sad theme hunnie.


  • Atrophya
    February 11, 2008

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    oh you definitely should crash!

    that'd be awesome and then you could make like another heartbreak collage using all these pieces from various poems you've written and I'd completely love it like the rest of your fan because I'm an avid reader and LOVE your poetry =]

    i know what you mean though =/

    i don't much like change or people leaving, I feel that much more alone and I hate it. I hope you feel better and get through it okay =/