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Behind The Glass

Lately, I can't hear as well
Currently, I can't remember much either
Recently, my mind has been A.W.O.L.
Actually, it's hard to describe
Literally, I've been acting quite normally
Secretively, daily activities are  taxing
Honestly, I wish this fog would clear
Frequently, I wonder if it's a condition
Lightheartedly, I brush it off
Cheerfully, I look towards the sky
Warmly, I embrace the brazen sun




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it started with the realization that i'm losing my hearing (they're clogged and infected i think)

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  • Crazy-Love
    February 13, 2008

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    I really loved it!
    The way its written is pretty awesome.
    I love how its all, Currently, recently,honestly...!! I dunno but i really Liked this!


  • Broken Faith
    February 12, 2008

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    Yay for Madi! About damn time you got something new posted. Good write, left a smile on my face, so I'll give you three!


  • UrbaN PlaguE
    February 11, 2008
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    I love it. =] I can really relate to this in such a deep way...Great job.


  • MissyAnn
    February 11, 2008
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    Secretively, daily activities are taxing
    that reminded me of Mrs. fergie

  • emLeejo
    February 11, 2008
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    awh... idk why but it just reminded me of the book my class read for english. lol the one. i uhmm read a bit fast lol the giver.. yah. idk why but it just did, but i did like it.. very.. you, but then again not like you if you get what i mean, but it was good i liked it.. wonderful!

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