Constant wars with voices
you never know are real
Illusion of victory-
slips away every time
The white flag rises
as lunacy advances,
Sanity never wins anyways.
Author notes
prompt: surrender
27 words.
A contest entry
- Pen me 30 words or less by Aussie Gypsy.
375 points, ended February 14, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This last line is so very true, well done on a great piece here, you captured some honesty in this
Thank you for taking the time to enter, wishing you the best of luck
Karen -
i like the last line
it's true
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