From the black sky
Rain pours onto my head
These are my tears.
Author notes
13 words
A contest entry
- 31 Words or Less With A Prompt. by Exodus.
525 points, ended February 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Simple, to the point, and effective in a wierd way. It reminded me of a book I read a long time ago... I don't remember anything about the book, just the feeling I was left with at the end. Thank you
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this is such a sad but beautiful piece my devil on a cloud. the imagery is so strong and provking best of luck
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Nice write. Nice metaphor.
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