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pebble

Once I no longer laid in your arms, I wanted to be a volcano-
huge-
for you to climb over


or a steep valley
to watch you jump
with your muscular legs

but you walked like Jesus, floating over flat ground
and never shifted your eyes down
to the tiny pebble kicking against your shoe.

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narnarr

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  • Gl-ass
    February 26, 2008

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    and never shifted your eyes down
    to the tiny pebble kicking against your shoe.


    frlgflgf
    Great image!


  • A n u k e t
    February 11, 2008

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    mwahs! I LOVE YOU CRASH!! Thnk you for giving me something edible to read! ;]

    hehehe. I needed to hear your words for a while, thank you for this!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^


  • UCaNtSeeME
    February 11, 2008
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    I love this! It's so simple, but it packs a major punch. Perfect. Good job. ~Kaila