XSpeechless, Emotionless, NumbX
I am so broken
So lost and confused
I should stop crying, even though I don’t want to
The worst things get, the faster I die
So lost inside...
There’s no where to go and no where to hide
I just wish I could breathe again
I feel so lost, betrayed from this horrible fate
Nothing has been set right
My plea is forgotten with every sentence I say
This is my world… today
It’s silent as can be
Only my heart beats recklessly
I’m speechless to all that surrounds
Another tear drops to the ground
I can’t even look at myself
Such a waste of space
The emotion builds up inside me
Behind these tears I wait
Wait for you to rescues me
Make me feel again...
Make me smile one last time, make me want to never say goodbye
There’s no where to go and no where to hide
I just wish I could breathe again
I feel so lost, betrayed from this horrible fate
Nothing has been set right
My plea is forgotten with every sentence I say
This is my world… today
This is my world… today
Everyday... until you save me...
From myself.
Author notes
I've been going through a lot lately and I express myself through my writing. Please give me your opinions good or bad. Thank you.
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I like your flow of words here.
everything seems to flow together well
I don't think anyone really is a waste of space unless they have no contributing values to anything(which is not you).
I think life is really what you make of it and I think that certain situations can cloud our perception of life but I know that if you just be patient your cloud will be lifted and the chocolatte you pick will be the satisfying flavor of life.
Great job!
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I'd say that your emotions flow through the words
making the poem/song great ( and you used to say you couldn't write) I hope holly that you find ease in your pain
dont be shocked i know im Kevin lol
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I like this. You did a good job writing this. I know exactly how this is... I'm on my way to feeling numb again, and... I'm hoping I don't... seeing that I have so much to be happy about. at least I am happy and excited about seeing my brother and sister in law tonight... anywho. You did a wonderful job writing this peice! I love it! keep up your amazing work!!!!
CrimsonViper
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This is deep. I can really feel you pouring your heart out on the screen . your words are unique to those who don't understand.But this is only becuase they heard it a thousand time and didnt pay it no mind. I however know..
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Speechless...
I'm utterly speechless. It's the best work I've read yet! I can truthfully connect with this poem and it is just utterly amazing.
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WOW this is amazing and i can relate to it your words really spoke too me
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You have written well of the depression that surrounds you. Reaching out for someone to rescue you from yourself. The loneliness and confusion one feels when betrayed is all too real and must be dealt with before we hurt ourselves. Many share in your dilemma for I too can relate on a personal level.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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